Thursday, October 21, 2010

Educational System compare/contrast paragraph

Systems of Education in Saudi Arabia and South Korea

       After interviewing my international friends about educational systems, I found that there are several similarities and differences in regard to time spent in school between South Korea and Saudi Arabia. The first point of comparison is related to the time period students attend school. In both countries, students are required to attend school for 12 years. Specifically, these years are divided into 6 years in the elementary school, 3 years in the middle school and 3 years in high school. However, in Saudi Arabia, it’s necessary to attend school for 12 years, but it’s not essential to attend high school in South Korea. Still, like Saudi Arabian students, most Korean students do go to high school. The next area for comparison concerns time spent in school. For example, Saudi Arabian students are in school for about 6 hours per day, whereas Korean students are in school for about 9 hours per day. In addition, Korean students go to school for 6 days per week, unlike in Saudi Arabia where students go to school for 5 days per week. The final point is related to the vacation taken from school. For instance, in both countries, the period of vacation is about 4 months. Moreover, the vacation in both countries begins in July and December. In conclusion, although there are some differences in regard to time spent in school between two countries, there are many similarities.

12 comments:

  1. "9 hours per day"
    It's a long time to spend in school.

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  2. hhhh yaa I agree that with Meng- Jou ... in our country Saudi Arabia we spend 6 hours a day just, and most of the student feel boring-_* .. I think that if we study like your country, students will cry and leave school _-_

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  3. OH! it is a really good paragraph!
    I'm agree with you guys it is a lot of time, in my country we spend 8 hours and i already think is too much!

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  4. "Korean students are in school for about 9 hours per day"
    If I'm Korean students, I couldn't concentrate on last two or three classes...haha

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  5. How many breaks do you have per day? And are all the nine hours taking classes or there is a time to do your homework??

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  6. also in south Korea the high scool is optional?

    really nice

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  7. What a great paragraph hope to see you writing again

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  8. Hmm... :-)
    Many friends think it's strange that Korean students are in school for 9 hours per day.
    Actually, most of high school students in Korea are in school for 11 hours per day, so I take in the fact as a matter of course :-).

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  10. 2. This is the a good paragraph because it has a very good introduction sentence, it's clear and easy to understand.

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  12. 1. This is the best because the coherent paragraph is making it easy to follow while reading it.

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